Rule of Thirds Critique

 

I like the way the pattern of lines converges at a point (purposefully a third away from the top left corner), drawing the eye to the disappearing minuteness of the distance. I do wish that the angle had been from slightly higher so that more of the tracks were visible, and that the depth of field had been less shallow; the rail closest to the camera was too blurry and unfocused. However, I like the contrast and composition, for the most part, and I like the way the whitened sky dips down to meet the tracks in the shape of a tornado.